Dårlig lyrikk

benorbeen

intelligentlemaniac
#41
9,000

caught a contagion for
improv equation
the newest sensation:
"cooperation"

hardsell persuasion
on this occasion
9k fixation
(indoctrination)

chaotic information
and humanation
the characterization
of ideation

the next invasion
of improvisation
is coordination
else annihilation

gimme attention, i want your suggestion
a need for connection, long-form perfection

i hit reply and then i die, and
if i die i'll still reply, and

i make a thread and then i'm dead, and
when i'm dead i'll make a thread, and

ostentation
breeds irritation
yet in deviation
lies conjugation

cleave narration
for motivation
pursue for duration
then game rotation

the true ovation
is "cooperation"
refuse editation
on cachinnation

inspiration
yields termination:
where in tarnation's
neutrino nation?

gimme attention, i want your suggestion
a need for connection, long-form perfection

i hit reply and then i die, and
if i die i'll still reply, and

i make a thread and then i'm dead, and
when i'm dead i'll make a thread, and


3/04
 

benorbeen

intelligentlemaniac
#42
<b>The Special</b>

it's not on the menu
you have to ask for it
hear about it
(it's really sacred & special)

joe might know about it
but you don't know joe
so you might never
in your lifetime
consider to try it

you know, it doesn't look all that pretty
pumping & bleeding all over the plate
but it's there for you if you know how to ask

all you have to do is want
and take very small bites

if you don't like it, you don't like it
but please don't send it back

simply say you're done,
"thank you,"
and "that was new and different
and exciting"


3/30/04, first draft
 

benorbeen

intelligentlemaniac
#43
<b>Videotape</b>

here is my tape of marjoe.
on it, there is stuff you will likely probably like
but i realized i also have
halo none on it. why is because
they both arise strong emotional reactions
in me.
i am not telling you this, but
i am trusting you automatically
and i am wondering if you'll have
me over to watch them
with you.


3/30/04, first draft
 

benorbeen

intelligentlemaniac
#44
<b>Geschmoochen Sie</b>

ithappenslastnightbutinthecontextofotherrelationsimstillintheboatitrocksiinvestlesswhichisgoodbutasliverofthoughtisreservediwatchihopealittlebutwithlessserstakes"putyourhandonmyface"icommandherasshekissesmethistimeshedoestwohandedwithforcewhichisnotasniceasthefirstchappedmeatingonesuchgorgeousgorgersshimmerywowhowdidimissthisordismissthisnowigettokissenough ilistandwishshesearchesforpjstodaythatmatchforusifthiswereapoemiwouldfindpoetryinitshesearches"doyoutrustme"yesitrustyouitrustyouropinionmorethanminesopleasegobuythepjsforusandmaybeillbuythemfromthedirectorandmaybeyouwilltooandmaybesomedaywewillkisswhilewearingthemandwatchingthatvideotape (ha) ormaybenottheboatrocksagainiamlessseasickbythethroesorsoitgoessuchislifewefeelwekeelandreelwhenweacknowledgetherealanddeal

wehopetosealbutsometimesallwehearis barking


4/6/04, stream of consciousness rumination, slightly edited; vBulletin reformats some punctutation over what is intended
 

benorbeen

intelligentlemaniac
#45
10,000

you step onto a message
a message board, a message board
and you post a lot

you slit your throat on a message board
on a message board, on a message board
and you bleed a lot

[What is the Harold trying to say?
Just look at the end. Everything connects.
So don't you think the Harold is saying that--
]

you cut your teeth on a message board
on a message board, on a message board
"you don't think a lot"

you laid your wreath on a message board
on a message board, on a message board
you dug your grave, now take your plot

[What use is taking a suggestion
if you're just gonna do whatever you please?
Have you heard the phrase "Take a hint"?
Well take the hint! Go with it,
and fucking come back around to it!
Jesus Christ! Lord have mercy on our souls!
]

Don't Ben Don't Been
Post 10,000 Post 10,000
Don't Ben Don't Been
Post 10,000 Post 10,000

reputation, underscored,
underscored, underscored,
underscored, etc., (undeserved)

[Don't you ever revise your maps?
Look at the territory? Improv has turned into
a bunch of back-patting, ass-grabbing, and
cluster-fucking. Where's the art?
Just because you call yourself and improviser,
doesn't mean you actually do it!
]

Don't Ben Don't Been
Post 10,000 Post 10,000
Don't Ben Don't Been
Post 10,000 Post 10,000
Do it Do it
Post 10,000 Post 10,000
Do it Do it
Post 10,000 Post 10,000

This post is not Berrebbi Approved
REPEAT: "I Do Not Need Berrebbi's Approval"

humanation in a mental ward
in a mental ward, in a mental ward
i can't find my want

(i can't find my want, i can't find my want, etc.)

[The game of the scene is not what's interesting,
or what's funny, or the pattern of the scene.
My shirt has a fucking pattern.
The game of the scene is the interplay of wants.
Stop finding your feelings.
FIND YOUR WANT!
]

[What is the Harold trying to say?
Just look at the end. Everything connects.
So don't you think that Del Close is saying--
]

Do it Do it
Post 10,000 Post 10,000
Do it Do it
Post 10,000 Post 10,000
Don't Ben Don't Been
Post 10,000 Post 10,000
Don't Ben Don't Been
Post 10,000 Post 10,000

[May I have a suggestion from the audience?
A word, a phrase, anything ...
Preferably not food.
We're all hungry.
Hungry for satisfaction.
And I want satisfaction.

GIMME A FUCKING SHOW!
]

Don't Ben Don't Been
Post 10,000 Post 10,000
Don't Ben Don't Been
Post 10,000 Post 10,000
Don't Ben Don't Been
Post 10,000 Post 10,000
Don't Ben Don't Been
Post 10,000 Post 10,000


1/1/05, http://10000.benhauck.com
 

benorbeen

intelligentlemaniac
#46
Paint Stripper

as she worked at the coat,
she brushed,
turned,
bended,
grazed,
glazed
and a stupid giddy smile unfolded
and holded. . .

oh, the fumes:
funny babble,
and bubbling desires,
it was,
it was
radiance
unadulterated

and at the end,
"would you like to put your ***"
i was about to cry
it was ridiculous
a gift
it was something much more powerful than i had ever expected

what a stripper.

she put on the coat, and left
a glowing dutch boy.


6/10/2008, first poem in a helluva long time, I hope it works okay
 

benorbeen

intelligentlemaniac
#47
Laptop

heat hot
and motoring
on my lap

the hand moves to
arrow

a cursor, ravishing
a charged battery

ram and hard drive
it all makes sense

and i'm processing...

praise god,
praise god for

backspace


6/11/2008, a poem related to the prior
 

benorbeen

intelligentlemaniac
#48
Projective Geometry

you're a home
with exhaustive bedrooms,
too countless to try
and try that i might, you
keep opening doors
to rooms i can't quite fill

and this inspires me about you,
the infinitude of your space,
this holy openness, unrivaled;
it's what made you be the one

and it's not a marketing ploy,
it's just what you are,
and it's not something to be seen
but something purely to be experienced

the estate is real
but you are
unreal


6/25/2008, after watching the first season finale of Rock of Love
 
Top